October 5th, 2011
“First”
Wasn't in that day
stranded broke in Portadown
wrote one anyway
(14:05)
“Unexpected Winds”
Winds snatch hat away
she pursues and picks it up
keeps calm and carries on
(15:12)
“In Belfast Rain”
In Belfast rain
girl writes haiku in the street
paint stained hidden poet
(15:14)
“Death of the Machine”
On Loughview sliproad
three seven zero breaks down
passengers still on
(16:20)
NB: I've been led to believe (by the Internet, durr hurr) that 'haikku' is the plural of 'haiku'. If someone here knows better, feel free to correct me!
Wasn't in that day
stranded broke in Portadown
wrote one anyway
(14:05)
“Unexpected Winds”
Winds snatch hat away
she pursues and picks it up
keeps calm and carries on
(15:12)
“In Belfast Rain”
In Belfast rain
girl writes haiku in the street
paint stained hidden poet
(15:14)
“Death of the Machine”
On Loughview sliproad
three seven zero breaks down
passengers still on
(16:20)
NB: I've been led to believe (by the Internet, durr hurr) that 'haikku' is the plural of 'haiku'. If someone here knows better, feel free to correct me!
- Music:When the Faction's Fractioned - Biffy Clyro
I wrote this on the bus to Belfast this morning. It's my attempt at improving on the two villanelles I'd written earlier, in which I chose my rhyme scheme and repeating lines, then built a poem around it. It's not perfect, but I feel it's a hell of a lot better. It's biographical in nature and won't take a genius to figure out! As for my other two villanelles, I love the central themes to them, so I'd love to rewrite them in future.
Even though you're far away
Even though you're far away
with distance set to last a while
I fall for you again each day.
And every day you mend the pain
In phone calls, photos, glimpse your smile
your laugh; the things you say.
I love your heart, your soul, the way
you resonate across the miles.
I love your laugh; the things you say.
Between us, even though there's rain
and months of parting at a time,
I fall for you again each day.
Before us, even though there's pain
it's due to pass; it won't defy
I hear your laugh, the things you say.
Those months will pass, those years won't stay
like winter when spring finds its time;
I'll have your laugh, the things you say.
I fall for you again each day.
Even though you're far away
Even though you're far away
with distance set to last a while
I fall for you again each day.
And every day you mend the pain
In phone calls, photos, glimpse your smile
your laugh; the things you say.
I love your heart, your soul, the way
you resonate across the miles.
I love your laugh; the things you say.
Between us, even though there's rain
and months of parting at a time,
I fall for you again each day.
Before us, even though there's pain
it's due to pass; it won't defy
I hear your laugh, the things you say.
Those months will pass, those years won't stay
like winter when spring finds its time;
I'll have your laugh, the things you say.
I fall for you again each day.